Andrew is learning descriptive writing in school. He was asked to write about a special time in his life. This is his story, as he wrote it. I have not changed anything. Enjoy....
MY FIRST BABY SISTER
The most fantastic suprise I've ever had was when I got a baby sister. First, my mom named her Addison. Addison was crying for about 2 hours. Then she was sleeping afterwards and she was buetifuly adorabull.
Also when I got to hold her, she was so tiny. When I touched her stomach, it was smooth and shiny. So I asked my dad to hold her for a couple more minutes. When he said, "yes, sure", I felt awesome. So I looked in to her eyes and I fell emoshinal and suprised because she kicked my arm. Right then I knew I had my first baby sister.
When I got my first ever baby sister, it was the best thing that ever happened to me!
Andrew Garrett
